Superpowered Script (Second Draft)

So here I am again.

Second draft of ‘Superpowered’; this is named for reasons what instantly don’t come to mind straight away, but makes sense in context to the story.

I thought this one worked much better on getting the beginning of the game and internal troubles rolling. I imagined it very much with action and reaction shots at the front.

It was all about what these characters were going through, and what they have been through. I tried to set up enough hints at their and the world’s back story to try and get people interested, to continue on.

I mean, you leave these clues and you just hope people follow them in the end. That’s all anyone can do.

Anyway, I’ll let the script do the rest of the talking:

Superpowered Script

Jon here.

Hope you all have a good weekend!

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